B9409024 (A2)

#2 Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory

I have lived outside for three years since I was a high school student. I know that both in the dormitory and at home have their advantagesand disadvantages. While in the dormitory (has)==>there are much more freedom and time, at home there is more private (privacy). When it comes to freedom, living in the dormitory is freer than living at home because you can come and go as you like without interference from parents. The decision, when to get back, and what to eat, is on your hand. Unlike living in the dormitory, living at home you can not participate night activities, such as singing at KTV, and dancing at night club. You can not eat pizzas for lunch and eat stinky tofu for dinner. [[Likewise]]==>Moreover/Furthermore, [[in the dormitory has]]==>living in the dormitory, you can have much more time, because you can save the time of traffic. [[The time, you can]]==>You can use the time that you save to join some clubs to cultivate your interest. For instance, the ballroom dancing club, the soccer club, and the guitar club. While at home you will worry about whether you can catch the last bus, if you stayed at school late. Moreover, in the dormitory you can discuss yourlessons (your lessons) with your classmates, but at home you can not do that. On the other hand, living at home is more private because you have your own room. You can do anything you want and [[not disturb]]==>without disturbing others. While in the dormitory, you have to take care of the other's (others') feelings. For example, you can not (open)==>turn on themusic (the music) loudly when your roommates are sleeping. Finally, where you live in depends (depending) on what you want. If you want your life (is)==>to be wonderful, living in the dormitory is a good choice. However, if you feel you need privacy, living at home is for you.

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