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Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory (version two

There are many differences between living at home and living in the dormitory. Though I have never lived in the dormitory, many of my friends told me the things about the experiences that they lived in the dormitory. I think the remarkable difference between living at home and in the dormitory is you should do everything by yourself. Owing to we live at home since we was born, we were used to be (arranged everything)==>managed by parents in terms of everything. We shouldn't (do not have to) worry about how to prepare our diet. Parents would protect us (not to be harm)==>from being harmed and give us a lot of care. We wouldn't (will not) grow up because parents shield us from hard things. [[Adversely, living in the dormitory unlike living in the home]]==>Unlike living at home, living in the dormitory, you should do everything by yourself. Things like cleaning your room and washing dirty clothes…, etc. Maybe these things are very cumbersome, but it can train us to be independent on the other hand. And when you live in the dormitory, you can know every kind of roommates. It seems to be interesting to make a lot of friends. You can found (find) distinctive characters from them. For example, people who come from the south are friendly and they speak Taiwanese fluently. On the contrary, you should tolerate dissimilar life styles in the dormitory and you don't (do not) have personal space to do the things you like to. For instance, some people are used to going to bed late because they like to do things in the midnight. Some people will be crazy when they can't (cannot) sleep enough (have enough sleep/sleep well).
Living at home and living in the dormitory have each (both) advantages and disadvantages. But it depends on yourself to choose one suitable for you . Next semester I will have a chance to live in the dormitory. I think I should try to learn how to adapt to various conditions and become mature.==>Good luck to you!

***Though you mention the remarkable difference between living in the dormitory and at home is doing things by yourself, you also talk about people's distinctive characters and differernt life styles. You might want to rewrite your topic sentene to include them as the other two main points in your article.