A9403014 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory. (PART2)

[[I have stayed in outside since I went to study at Ming-Chi technology university, and it forces me to live at school.]]==>I had lived in the dormitory when I went to Ming-Chi Institute of Technology. To live [[at school]]==>on campus has several advantages. First, schoolmates (classmates) have more time to get together with each other and the sentiment (relationship) also could quite be (be quite) good. Second, if I had any questions I coucld ask the (my) schoolmates to help me. Third, because I handled everything with my schoolmates, I could have a better tacit (mutual) understanding. Fourth, [[the fees at the school]]==>the expenses of living in the dormitory are lower than those of living at home. But [[the there are als some shortcoming.]]==>there are some disadvantages of living in the dormitory. First, the daily schedule would limit my free time, and I could not do anything in my spare time. Second, if you were not fun to be with, your relations with the classmates will be worse than before. Now, I study at NTUST, and I rent a house near my school. [[I found that there are some problems.]]==>Please rewrite this sentence becasue the following reasons that you provide do not only include problems but also advantages. First, it is very obviously to see that the living fees (expenses) are greatly increased, I may spend about twenty thousand a month. Second, if you rent a house outside, then you certainly have the free live, and [[you completely illuminates own custom to live.]]==>??? Third, I can have a part-time job and it can also make me learn how to independent in my life. [[Because I have not already lived at home, I do not know I could meet what kind of questions in fact, but it can be imagined that could have several questions.]]==>You do not have an experience in living at home??? First, parents could limit my free time and (control me)==>demand what time I should go back home. Therefore, [[the comparison was unable too late to turn over]]==>???. Second, [[the host meal may eat at home, and living in the dormitory does not need to spend much money.]]==>??? Therefore, the [[life expenditure]]==>living expenses can be much less. Third, I may have more time to (accompany with)==>accompany my parents. Now I live (in outside)==>outside, and [[I probably]]==I can only go home once a month. Living at home and in the dormitory both has (have) the good and bad points (sides), but I would like to live in the dormitory. It is quite free, but it can also (quite be)==>be quite laborious.