A9415032 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory (#2)

Students might go to other places far away from their homes to study and [[maybe living in dormitory or living at home.]]==>may live in the dormitory or live at home. There are so many differents (differences) between convenient (convenience) and learning in terms of living in dormitory and living at home. Living at home is much more convenient than living in the dormitory because every meal (would be)==>are prepared by your parents and you don't have to spend much time to prepare it. Moreover, parents can always take care of you when you are sick or feel not so good, and they won't (will not) worry about you [[because of they always keeping with you.]]==>because they can alway keep an eye on you. However, if you want to be better in learning things, you should (living in dormitory)==>live in the dormitory because it makes you more independent and learns (learn) how to get alone with your classmates. Besides, you can discuss your homework with your classmates all the time. As the result (As a result), to live in the dormitory is helpful for learning. There're (There are) many different (differences) between living in the dormitory and living at home, [[it's important to choose the living place ,and to live in right place is definitely helpful to learn things or life's convenience.]]==>It is important for you to choose a place where you feel it is convenient for your life or helpful for your study.

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