A9408047 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory--(2)

There are so many [[different in life style]]==>differences between living at home and in the dormitory. I have lived in the dormitory for six years. So I clearly know [[what different]]==>what the differences are between living at home and in the dormitory. The dormitory is a public place. If you want to do something,you need to think about other people. Because you may influence other people. I like to go to bed on (at) one o'clock. But my classmates like to sleep lately. Of course they always go to class lately. Anyway, they always make a lot of noises, and this let me hard to sleep. At my home (At home), I can sleep very comfortably. I have much personal place. In the dormitory, you need to do everything by yourself. The other people will not do something for you. You need to learn how to grow up. [[Unlike living at home]]==>Living at home, your mother will wash the clothes or [[be ready the fruit]]==>prepare fruits for you and your father will fix the electric products. But I think (it)==>living in the dormitory also has a lot of advantages. For example, I can go to class (slowly)==>on an easy pace. Beacause I don't need to spend much time on (traffic)==>transportatioin. Especially for some students who live very far (to)==> from school, they need to spend about one hour to go to school. Anyway, I think I like living at home more than living in the dormitory. Because I like to have a private space. And the important thing is that when I need [[noiselessness]]==>to be quiet, I hope (it)==>my surrounding is quiet.

***An adequate description of comparing the differences between living at home and in the dormitory. Try not to use a lot of "Anyway" in your article. It would make your work sound colloquial (conversational).