B9209014 (A2)

(2nd)Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory

Living at home is (different environment from)==>different from living in the dormitory. [[On the traffic]]==>When it comes to transportation, if you living (live) at home, you have to get up earlier than those who living in the dormitory. For example, I am living at home in HsinChuang(新莊) now, it is far from NTUST, if I take the public transportation to school, I need to spend 1.5 hours, but those who living in the dormitory do not have to that like me. If I live in the dormitory, I can have more sleeping time. However, living in the dormitory, you will have to pay more expenses on food. When you live in the dormitory, you eat your breakfast, lunch and dinner outside, because you do not have a kitchen in the dormitory. It is more expensive than you cooking (cook) meals by yourself. (On the other hand)==>Furthermore, the meals you eat outside are also unhealthy because they are almost oily, salty and contain much more calories. The most important of all - the privacy, you have to share your room with your roommates when you live in the dormitory. Sometimes your roommates maybe (may) do something and you will feel botheration (bothered) , embarrassed , and even angry with them. For example, my friend often complains about his roommate's snore disturbed (disturb) his sleep every nights (night). It is really annoying. Unlike living in the dormitory, when you live at home, you have your own space; you can listen to music loudly, sleep lately, you can do anything you want without bothering anyone. However, you can learn how to make a decision by yourself and how to live independent by living in the dormitory. [[It is different experience to living at home and in the dormitory.]]==>Living at home andd in the dormitory are two different experiences.

***Good comparison of living at home and in the dormitory. However, please pay attention to use connecting words to well link your sentences.