2007年5月17日 星期四

B9215025 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory (version 2 not yet)

Many peoples' life has been changed since they get into the college. The biggest change is about the lodgment (accomodation). Many students start to live at (in) the dormitory. And the main differences between living at home and living at (in) the dormitory are the traffic (transportation) problem and the change of daily life. For me, I live at home, and I have to take more than 40 minutes to ride a motor bicycle to school. Otherwise (Especially), I need to set out before 7:50 in the morning, if the first class starts at 8:30 morning. And I have to pray there have (are) no traffic jams. In (At) this time, maybe many students in the dormitory (still in sleep)==>are still asleep, and they only need to wake up before 8:20 a.m., then walk to the classroom happily. (And)==>When it comes to the change of daily life. If you live at home, your parents may restrain your behavior. For example, you can not go home too late, and you can not sleep too late. Definitely you can not be absent form the class very easily. But, if you live at (in) the dormitory, no one would care about when you come back to the dormitory, even you stay outside all the night (all night), and no one would care about when you go to sleep, and of course no one would care about your absence from the class. In conclusion, although liviing at the dormitory is very convenient. But that may make you become lazier. So, if you do not want to be flunked out (flunked) by the school, you need to ay more attention on (to) your studying (study).

***Adequate description of the differences between living at home and in the dormitory.

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