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Compare And Contrast Living At Home And In The Dormitory[ #2 ]

　　　There are many differences between living at home and in the dormitory.　Living at home is more convenient and private than living in the dorm.　In comparison, because you no longer live with your parents, living in the dormitory is a good opportunity to train you to be independent as well as to learn how to create a good relationship with your roommates, and you have much freedom, too.　　　I have lived in the dormitory for almost seven years since I graduate from junior high school.　In general, forming good manners (behaving well) is important when living with roommates.　For instance, if your roommates are used to staying up late, you have to ask them to talk in undertones and turn off the light.　Try to communicate with them politely.　But if you are at home, you can take it easy.　Also, for respecting your roommates, you have to keep the public environment clean.　Besides, you can chat with your roommates about school life or something. [[take care of each other.　Then]]==>By taking care of each other, you begin to create a good friendship with your roommates gradually.　And the last as well as the most important one is that you can arrange the time by yourself.　It is good but also difficult.　[[You have much freedom]]==>Having more freedom means that you have to control yourself. [[Not like you are at home]]==>Unlike at home, your parents cook for you, buy daily necessities for you, take care of you, and show you what is right or what is wrong all the time. 　　　Although it is inconvenient and sometimes you will lose your privacy [[when comparing]]==>compared to living at home, you will realize the advantages if living in the dormitory for a period of time.　I love to live in the dormitory than to live at home. [[but it depends on you.]]==>The ending is kind of colloquial, how about change into "What is your prference?"

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