B9303004 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory(3rd)

I live in the dormitory. Before I went to university, home was where I live. When talking about home or dormitory, there are pros and cons in (for) both. And I like to live in the dormitory more than at home. The differences between home and the dormitory are convenience, cost, comfort, freedom, and the attitude toward studying. First, it's (it is) more convenience (convenient) to live at home than in the dormitory. This is because mom or dad can take care of all the things I need. I don't (do not) have to do them by myself. For examples (example), the foods and the clothes. My mom is a housewife so I never worry about eating. But now, if I want to eat lunch or dinner, I have to go outside. And I worry about what should I eat a lot . At home, I got everything I need for studying or daily life by my mom. Now I have to solve them by myself. Under this kind of condition, the cost of living at home is lesser than that of in the dormitory. My mom cook every day so I needn't eat outside. On the other hand, I can save money at eating. [[That was the same that I didn't need to spend my own money. ]]==?? What's (What is) more, [[it's more comfortable at home]]==>living at home is moreo comfortable because living in the dormitory, I need to care about other roommates whether my music or talking is too loud. I feel pressured in the dormitory because I am not familiar with roommates. However/Nevertheless, unlike living at home, I have much freedom living in the dormitory. At home, if I want to go outside, I had to tell my mom. And she always asked me what time will I be back. But now in the dormitory no one restricts me anymore. I can do anything at will. When it comes to study, for me, I study harder at home than in the dormitory. I think it is because Mom urged me to do that. I am the only one who urge me to study hard in the dormitory. On the other hand, I can have fun in the dormitory and without anyone controlling me. I studied every single day at home, but now I study only before the tests. I like to live in the dormitory (just)==>mostly because I have much freedom in the dormitory. Although living at home is much better than living in the dormitory in many ways. I like (this kind of happy atmosphere)==>the happy atmosphere in the dormitory.

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