B9409026 (A1)

why did you choose your major(3rd)

The reason why I choose (chose) my major is interst. I remember when I was a high school student, I just (study and study)==>studied day and night for going to a better school. I have no time to think about the future, but when I finished the test (entrance exam) , I think it's time (I thought it was time) to think that carefully. Then I (go to the wide)==>surfed on the World Wide Web to find some information to understand what majors are (belong to)==>suitable for me. And I found a place (which are teach computer, that make me want to learn computer)==>where I could learn using computer, so I decided to tell my parents that I wanted to leran that. But my parents didn't agree to (with) it, because the prices is (were) too expense. I was very disappointed to hear what they said. (This reason make)==>Their reply made me to choose this major because I really wanted to to know how to use computer. After a long summer vacation, I (enter to information manegement)==>was admitted to the Department of Information Management of the National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. I have learned many things about computer from my major. [[in all I've learn]]==>Among what I have learned, I like programming most, because I feel that writing a program is very intersting; I can creat a program to run waht I want to. So this is another reason why I choose my major, and I believe my choose (choice) is right.

***Although you say that you chose your major due to interest; however, in the main body you do not let the readers to see this point clearly. You do indicate the point at the end but you say that it is "another reason." You may want to reorganize your paragraph to make your main point clearer.