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Why did I choose my major?

My major is computer science and information engineering,"CSIE" for short. Why I chose CSIE to be my major is that I like computer.The most important reason is that right after my father bought me a computer when I was 11 years old, I was attractive by it immediately, because it was very useful. I can used it for painting, calculating, playing games, and talking with someone on the Internet, too. When I got into junior high school, I found a new way to use it. I used it to do my homework, it was more convenient and faster than just using my hand. As time (goes)==>went by, it became (my life's one very important tool in every thing)==>one of the very important tools in my life. (, and I think I like it.)==>It is suggested that you delete this part, because it sounds informal. Another important reason is that when I was a senior high school student and ready to go to university, my grade of the university entrance exam can (could) let me choose between the Department of CSIE of National Taiwan University of Science and Technology and the Department of Electronic Engineering of National Taipei University of Technology. (But my teacher in senior high school suggested me to)==>With my senir high school teacher's suggestion, I choose (chose) the National Taiwan University of Science and Technology and CSIE to be my major. Still, another reason why I chose "CSIE" to be my major is because I was interested in programming when I was a senior high school student. When I was a senior high school student, my major was Electronics. I was not very interested in it. But(delete this word) I was more interested in computer class than Electronics. For me, programming is just like painting, if you have good ideas in your mond (mind), then you can write a good programe, and computer can show how your programe works immediately, not like electronic experiment; it has too much unsuspected condition to bother your work. I am glad that I chose CSIE to be my major, because I will have more opportunities to find more fun in computer.

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