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Why did I choose my major?

(I am a mechanical student.)==>I am a student majoring in mechanical engineering. Why did I choose this majoy? (I think that there are two causes)==>There ar two reasons for me to make this decision:scores and a desire for studying in Taipei. [[Score is the important cause.I only have 61 score (perfect score is 75) in Basic Competence Test.This score can't admission me into NTU, NTHU(清華大學), NCTU(交通大學)or NCKU(成功大學).And a important point is my English only get 8(perfect score is 15).A lots school take some curriculums to make base to admission into their school.Good school almost stipulate that English need upward 12 score.This meaning is I have no qualifications to apply for their school.Even if my score high then other applicants.But fortunately, NTUST doesn't have any limit to all senior high applicants.Only Information Engineer need some productions such as program.This is not good thing for me because this major is my interest.Since that I only choose other major or I didn't apply for NTUST.I already have no school to study so I choose first surely.In fact, if I want, I can join Designated Curriculum Test(指定考試).But this test is very hard and I have no confidence to get great score enough into the 4 national school.Because my English maybe get zero I belive.So I choose mechanical from other major.This major only allow 4 persons so I think that maybe few persons choose this major that I have more probability.I only want into a good school that I consider.When I am one grade in senior high school, I already decide to go to Taipei for study in the future.My parents are strict so I alway want free.So that I want to go to other place not only stay home.And I want independent not always solve all problems by my parents.I like ascensive city more than country.Ascensive city can make me feel convenient and there are a lot of restaurants because I like eat delicious food and many place I can go not only stay home or school.So Taipei is the best choose.Even if this major is not my love most, but now that I study here.I just accept it, like it and find some interesting things.Pass three years, I belive that I do.I find something I like honestly.I belive that I choose the right major for my future.]]==>Please see the paraphrase of your article in the following.
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As far as scores are concerned, the reason why I chose Mechanical Engineering as my major at Natioinal Taiwan University of Science and Technology (NTUST) was mainly becasue I did not do a good job in Basic Compentence Test (BCT), especially in the part of English test. Although I desired to enter one of the four famous national univeristies, NTU, NTHU, NCTU, or NCKU, my overall scores of BCT do not reach their minimum requirements. When I considered applying for other good universities, I found that they set the minimum English scores to be 12 while my scores were only 8. Knowing that most of the NTUST's departments do not set a limit for applicants (the exception is the Department of Information Engineering, which is my favor), I applied for the Department of Mechanical Engineering by estimating the possibilities for me to be admitted and was luckily accepted by the department finally.

As far as my desire to study in Taipei...試著重新把第二個原因寫清楚, 整合一些次要點, 抓重點寫, OK?! 加油!