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Why did you choose your major?

My major is architecture. Why did I choose my major? I think that was a happy accident in junior school.The accident let me find many things that I liked in architecture life.

Why was it a happy accident? When I was in (junior school of third grade)==>the third grade of my junior high school. I studied absorbedly for entering a good senior high school. But unfortunately, I got an illness .The illness (let me infirm to)==>made me give up my dream (that is) to enter a senior high school. (Take it over,I enter a industril high school that was matriculated before.)==>??? Please rewrite this sentence to make it clearer. I majored in architecture in National Taichung Industril High School. (Ill runs apace.)==>???

Architecture let me feel it is a thing of (acquirement)??? We learned how to (finsh completed plan)??? It was an interesting process to finish a design assignment. First ,we have to think a concept about the design title. Then let the concept build in the architecture abstract, abstract is very difficult but that is what we have to do. Then we have to know the conditions of (advantageous and disadvantageous)==>advantages and disadvantages about the site of architecture. Finally,we have to finish completed plans and build a model.That are (is) a complex and long procee to finish a design assignment and (often let me lose sleep)==>it often deprives my sleep, but when I finish the project, (that always let me feel happy.)==>I always feel very happy.

I wanted to do the work that I can always feel happy. So I design (decided) to continue learned (learning) architecture. [[then I enter NTUST luckily.]]==>Luckily, after junior-college, I was admitted to National Taiwan University of Science and Technology and was able to major in architecture again. I love the beautiful accident six years ago. I think I will be an architect someday.