Why do (did) I choose my major ? part two
My major is mechanical engineering. When I was in my junior high school, I found that my English skills are a little poor. So, I choose (chose) (the engineering majors instead of business majors)==>mechanical engineering as my major instead of business. In these days, I find (found) that there is an important reason for me to choose my major. This is because my grades are not (enough well)==>good enough to study in electrical engineering, and I have to choose mechanical engineering to study finally. I have learned it for seven years. I think that I do not have any interests (interest) in it, and I have more interests (interest) in computer science engineering. I have ever considered (transfered)=>to transfer my major at first, but it is (was) very difficult to me, and I have to learn it (mechanical engineering or computer science engineering?) again. Thereforce, I decided to continue studying mechanical engineering. In conclusion, if I (were in)==>were back to my junior high school, I (will formulate it)==>would think about choosing my major very seriously. I think that a traditional concept to use the mechanical machines is a little (anachronism,)==>What do you mean by that? but machines are still necessary in our lives. I believe it is easy to find a job in the future with my major and that is why so many people want to study it. By the way, no matter what kind of majors you choose now, to learn (the)=>delete it English well is more important than (the expertise)==>??? Please elaborate on it. My English is still not so good, I hope I can (learn it a lot)==>improve on it after graduating from a (research institute)==> do you mean "graduate school"?
***Please pay attention to verb tense and word usage.

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