2007年4月27日 星期五

B9409024 (A1)

Why did you choose your major?

The primary reason why I chose my major was that I didn't think over carefully and [[afraid of making the result making decisions.]]==>??? are afraid of the consequences of making the decisioin by myself.

I don't like the department of information management now. At vocational high school, for example, my scores of " introduction to computer science" wasn't (were not) perfect, I (often was)=>was often punished to correct the exam paper two times, but there are (were) a lot of exam papers, so I couldn't finish it. It let me feel discouraged. I chose to cop out and purposely ignored it. [[The third of high school, for another example is that whenever I had some questions, I asked the teacher the answer. One time as usual I wanted to leave after asking the questions, the teacher knitting told me why I always ask such a simple questions. Ever after I didn't ask the questions and like it at all. ]]==>I do not quite understand this part. Do you want to say that one of your teacher's reaction to your questionning discouraged you? At that time I transferred my concentration to other subjects, [[but not any subject has specially performance.]]==>??? After listening to my friend's words, I had just found that my accounting grade is better than (any classmate)==>the other classmates in my class. For the reason, I spent much time studying it. For instance I could abidingly spent five hours practicing the questions of the reference book on Sunday. I also paid great attention to the learning of accounting on (in) class. Absolutely, the grades of the subject was (were) not bad and I love it as well.

After the exam (what kind of exam?) was hold, it was time to fill out the application, my father suggested me to choose the department of information management because he felt that the development of it in the future was good. However, I thought the department related to commerce or English was my interest [[for my English was poor, I worried about my living fee if I had chosen another department.]]==>I do not get it. Please elaborate on this part to make it clearer. Besides, I didn't care the decision at the moment, (I don't know the effect of the decision is so great)==>??? . Finally I accepted my father's advice.

(At Unvi it's unhappy for me to learn)==>I do not feel happy in learning programming language such as C and C#. I don't understand the logic of the programming language and (realize it without the desire)==>do not have any desire for learnig it. Now I just realize that (the suggestion of other you can make a reference)==>you can only take others' suggestons for reference, the most important, you must listen to the voice in your mind to know what you really want. It's your future, no one can help you meet the future (of all)==>at all, or you will have the same situation like me to spend four years miserably studying the department that you don't like.

It's a golden age to study your major during the age of university, if you decide the right decision, you will live a replete life.

***"don't, it's, wan't , didn't" are considered infomal. In formal writing, they should prsented as do not, it is, was not, did not.

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