A9408047 (A1)

(This problem spend me much time thinking about it.)==>This question took me much time to think about it. But now I am happy that I (choose my major.)==>chose Business Administration as my major, because I can learn what I want to learn. Let (mereach my vision.)==>elaborate on my point in the following.

First, I want to learn how to use money to make money. In some classes, like financial management or investment management,it (they) teach me how to find undervalue asset. And the most important thing is to teach me how to manager (manage) risk. You can't put all money in the same asset. Second,in Strategic Management Theory class, I can learn how to make strategies and what strategies is (are) better than others. In this class, it teaches me many (much)==>delete this word strategic models and find the five forces of a company.[[Then I can know what the competitive advantage does a company have.So I design the strategy of a company.Third,I like to research why a company can make more profit than other companies.I need to read a lot of stories of companies.And then I have to show why a companycan make more profit.Is it make the cost lower or attract more consumer to buy itsproduct.I must analyse it and make a report to my teacher.Fourth,I want to know how to evaluate a company's stock price.I like to find the stock prices of undervalue companies and put my money in them.After the stock prices rise,I can make my money more much. ]]==>I did not correct your grammar or give feedback to the above senttences.

All of them are my interests and my reasons. My major is Business Administration. I think my decision is right. I know very clearly why I choose it and I am so happy.I wish I can be a somebody in the future.


***I am afraid that you need to revise the paragraph becasue I did not see any reasons that prompted you to enter NTUST. The reasons that you provide are the features of some of the subjects in your major. "What did you choose your major?" means that you have to look back to your life before you entered NTUST to figure out what caused you to choose your current major.