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Why did you choose your major?
Computer science and information engineering is what I majored (major) now and there are couple of reasons attracted me to choose it. At first, majoring in computer science and information (facilitates)==>would help me to get a career (job) with high salary after I graduated (graduate). (As a result of that)==>delete this part As the type of industry varied rapidly in Taiwan, from agriculture to high-tech, skills of computer science are needed; therefore, people who majored (major) in computer science and information are popularly recruited from technology companies in these years. Secondly, (I’m actually interested in computer since I have)==>I was deeply interested in computer ever since I had touched computer. The first time I touched computer was to play computer games when I was a 13-year-old. Sometimes computer didn’t work, I tried to repair it by myself and I got a giant accomplishment. I’ve developed my interest in computers since then. Moreover, computer knowledge is widely required nowadays. For example, students usually type reports and hand in an assignment (through)==>with the help of computers. (And the computer applications greatly increase the convenient of life for peoplel)==>Computer also makes people's life more convenietn, such as gaining the latest information, shopping on the Internet as well as chatting with others. Therefore, I would like to improve my computer knowledge as possible as I can. [[Based on my interested (interest) in computer, desire to enrich my computer knowledge and possibilities to get a high salary career,I make a decision to major in computer science and information engineering.]]==>good conclusion!

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