B9415005 (A3)

Assignment 3(2nd edition): The Invention of Mobile Phone

In this modern city (society), mobile phone has been (become) one of the most important tools. We can see that all people on the road must have at least one cell phone. [[It just like a signal with the technical life]]==>It looks like a symbol of a modern life. [[What is the attractions mobile phone has]]==>Why mobile phone is so attractive that everyone loves to use it?

First, mobile phone is convenient. Mobile phone can phone somebody at once and everywhere. If you want to talk to your family, chat to (with) your lover, or meet you partner, you don't (do not) have to spend lots of time finding a public telephone. Just pick this little machine and click (dial) the number, and you can finish these immediately. Next, mobile phone is useful. [[During the development in mobile phone, it have been]]==>Mobile phone has been developed not only for a "phone" only but also for a multi-function phone. In addition to calling your friend, you can also send a short message to them. It is a good thing to let us communicate to (with) someone who can't (cannot) answer the phone in a minute. Besides, mobile phone can be like a notebook. You can write down something just like meeting, exams...and so on, so you do not have to bring your unnecessary jotter. You can also play little games in (on) mobile phone! During your boring time, you can play your mobile phone to kill the time and wait for your friend. It is so interesting! Third, mobile phone is potential. Although mobile phone is very convenient for us now, [[it still develop lots of useful utility]]==>there are still more useful utilities to be developed]] continually. Before long, we can see someone surfing the Internet by his phone and another one enjoying the movie at the same time. There are more and more [[cell phones be unusual]]==>unique cell phones. Maybe we can imagine that a mobile phone (were)=>is to be a laptop! We could do everything in (on) our cell phone!

In conclusion, mobile phone have (has) lots of advantages for us and effect (affects) our lives a lot. [[It is not]]==>There is no doubt that mobile phone is a progressive (advanced), convenient and essential goods in this life. Moreover, mobile phone [[still develops continually]]==>is still under development now. [[It has not stop in the limit of the technology]]==>There is no limit to the technology. We can believe that there were (will be) lots of more useful and convenient mobile phones occurred in the future.

***A detailed description of the effects of mobile phone.