There are many innovations which have changed the way people go about their lives. The top one is the Internet. The Internet is widely used on business, education, entertainment and so on, it can be seen everywhere. People use the Internet every day; it [[makes large effects]]==>has a huge effect on this world.
The most conspicuous (obvious) effect is the [[information of the communication]]==>the delivery of information. The Internet has become an important means of communication. Industries deal with their business by using the Internet, for example, customers can buy products on (the)=>a company's website, or (the)=>a company can sent (send) the latest product's DM to overseas manufacturers immediately by “E-mail.” Additionally, we can know the things happened not only at our home town but also those in the world when you surf the Internet. It saves us a lot of time to get information and communicate with other people.
The globe has become smaller after the Internet appeared. With a click, you can go anywhere in the world without leaving home. You can go to class in Harvard University by "distance learning", it is a method of instruction and learning designed to overcome problems of time and space by allowing students to study in their own homes on the Internet. It is very convenient and it can save (our)=>us changed this world, and it affects our everyday lives. Without the Internet, the world will in a complete mess today. It is the most important innovation in modern life.much money and time. Moreover, maybe you will meet foreign friends in "Netnews" or "Chatroom"; this is a chance that you can make friends with foreigners. "Space" has vanished, we live in a global village. ==>Good description.
In conclusion, although the Internet [[takes some bad influence such as some “modern disease” and the personal privacy may be seen, but it is no doubt ]]==>has some bad influences, such as addiction to the Internt and the intrusion of personal privacy, there is no doubt that the Internet has changed this world, and it affects our everyday lives. Without the Internet, the world will in a complete mess today. It is the most important innovation in modern life.==>Good conclusion!
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