A9401010 (A2)

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory (2)

I deeply know what is the difference between [[the living of dorm and home]]==>living in the dorm and at home. First, I want to compare the classmates. Living in the dorm can meet lots of friends. But living at home can not meet lost of classmates and you just be alone to do anything like homework. The second point is the discussion. I can discuss the questions and homework with my roommates. Besides, we can solve the difficult questions [[by everyone's thought, ideas]]==>taking into consideration everyone's thoughts and ideas. But if you live at home, you just can do these things alone and you can not discuss them with your classmates. That is really inconvenience (convenient). The third point is independence and the teamwork. Because you live in the dorm, you have to take care of yourself such as the laundry. You have to learn how to deal with all kinds of situations. And you have to learn the teamwork, that is, cooperating with others. But at home, your parents will fix you up with anything and deal with [[your any problems]]==>any problems of yours. You do not have to worry about it. [[That cause that]]==>As a result, you are not mature and independent. The fourth point is my personal opinion. If you live in the dorm, you will have more activities at night. For example, our classmates always play basketball at 6 or 7 P.M.. It is kinda (kind of) late for me, so I can not play with them. In sum, there are too many limits for the night activities. Definitely, living at home will take you lots of time and money on the transpot (transportation). Not like living in the dorm, you just walk 5 or 10 minutes to the classroom. Of course, living at home has more privacy and freedom. For example, sometimes you would like to read alone but you cannot. You want to listen to the music but they are studying or slepping. But at home, you can do anything you want at any time like playing the music loudly. It has more freedom. Finally both of them have their own advantages but I prefer the dorm living.

***Fluent and concise writing. You might want to consider writing a topic sentence in the beginning to organize the four points that you mention in the article.