A9402026 (A3)

Effect of air conditioner in modern life #1

In mordern life, most people's activities is (are) indoor. In school, students study and teachers teach in classrooms. In offices, employees do their jobs in big rooms. One thing that is very important to they (them) in summer so that they can be working normally and every building almost have (has) one is---air conditioner. [[This is make]]==>It makes people feel both bed (bad) and good.



Air conditioner can make your room's temperature low. It is savior of (for) people in summer. Everyone in summer always feel hot due to temperature high (high temperature). People alway stay in [[temperature low such]]==>places with low temperature so that they can feel better. Air conditioner makes people more concentrated. People can not pay attention in feeling bad. Therefore,they can pay more attention to his (their) work. For busniess, air conditioner can catch (attract) more consumers in [[his store]]==>their stores. [[Employer must catch conumer's mind]]==>A store keeper must be able to know consumers' needs in order for them to buy things in his store. Air conditioner is an important condition (equipment) for consumers. I think no consumers can stay in hot stores for a long time.



Air conditioner is an expensive machine!. [[This is not only expensive on his price,but consum large power on his using]]==>Both of its price and electricity consumption are expensive. Most air conditioner's prices is (are) between 5000 and 50000 TWD. It is [[according to size of your room and another fuction]]==>based on the size of your room and the functions added to the air conditioner. It consums more power (electricity) than general machines. If you (open)==>turn on it for a month, you may pay 3,740 TWD to power factory. The cost is not the fact that everyone can accept it.



So, air conditioner can bring advantage and disadvantage for us-low temperature and high cost. Athough cost is high, many people cannot but use it in summer. Beacuse it really feel bad in high temperature.

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