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2007年6月1日 星期五

The effects of MP3 and MP3 player [#2]
　　　Each innovation has catched everyone' eyes when it comes out first.　But after a period of time, people will look this innovation as an important thing if it is useful in some specific parts in our daily life, or it will be forgot soon.　When talking about music industry, everyone knows MP3 and looks it as one of everyday items.　　　

Are you addicted to music?　No wonder MP3 is so convenient that you do not have to take a CD(Compact disk) out which can saved (save) only ten songs at all!　It transforms voice records into digital files because MP3 files need less storage size than voice files.　[[Soon after, the MP3 players published]]==>Right after that, MP3 players are seen everywhere.　You can clearly see this innovation actually brings a lot of effects.　That is, everyone loves to take their MP3 player out to everywhere as long as they want to listen to the music at any time.　The reason why they act like that is not only because it is smaller than a CD walkman, but also because it can save much (many) more songs than a CD.　In addition, you can easily download all kinds of music online resulting from the high-speed Internet nowadays.　　　

Although the convenience that MP3 brings sounds really good, but there is still a problem about the copyright.　Do you know downloading music from the Internet where is not authorized is illegal?　Because of their (people's) carpetbag acting, it is really harmful for the music industry and many popular singers may refuse to publish their new albums.　People always try to get free songs on the Internet, but singers will refuse to sing anymore.　But I think it is not useful to stop this behavior.　The most important thing is that our government and the related music apparatus (organizations/units) should pay more attention to this problem.　　　

In fact, advantages usually accompany disadvantages when a new innovation is coming.　But for our life going better, all of us should have to promote morality of life at the very start.　After that, the innovation of MP3 and MP3 player will actually brings the good effects to us.　It has changed our life, and made a big step in modern life.

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