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The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life(#2)

[[We see the new invention form the news everyday, it's always surprised of ours.]]==>We are always surprised by the news of new inventions everyday. One product that my friend bought two weeks ago is a digital camera. The new digital camera improved the photo's quality of the pixels (become to )==>by ten million pixels. [[Whatever you say, ]]==>Whether you have agreed with that the new invention makes our life easier, convenient and superior, but there might be some problems unsolved.

[[Taking the example of camera]]==>Compared to traditional cameras, digital cameras [[makes us easy]]==>are easier to take photos even (if just)=>for a child. (The)==>A traditional camera has to turn a spring once before you taking (take) a photo [[when every time you using camera]]==>everytime you need to take a picture. But now the (a) digital camera can take photos right away without any (actions)=>preparation. In the other hand On the other hand), a digital camera does not need to set up any films because [[it is storing photos]]==>all of the photos are stored in a small digital memory card. You do not have to worry about how to set up films due to (the easy using)==the usefulness of the memory card.

[[The digital]]==>In contrast to a traditional camera, a digital camera has more powerful functions to enhance the convenience of taking photos. At the first (At first), there is a LCD screen on the (a) digital camera to help us see the area of what we are going to take, and we can zoom in or zoom out the focus. Moreover, we can pass the photos from a camera to a computer by connecting the camera to a computer. [[As this reason, it is really attractive that you can easier to]]==>As a result of this, a digital camera is really attractive because you can share those photos to your classmates or friends through the Internet. In the other word (In other words), it is more convenient to share photos by using a digital camera.

The most advantage of a digital camera is that [[has improving]]==>it has improved the quality of photos. Due to [[the digital camera is storing photos]]==>the fact that photos oof a digital camera are stored in memory card we can decide what photo we are going to delete or not immediately. Besides, the pixels of digital is (are) getting higher and higher so we can enlarge the photos with high quality. [[But there is a disadvantage about that there might be little true color's difference by using either digital or traditional camera.]]==>Why? I do not quite understand this part. [[Compare with the traditional camera and digital camera]]==>Compared to a traditional camera, excepting (except) the disadvantage of true color's difference a digital camera definitely can reduce the cost and improve the quality of photo.

[[The new invention of technology helps our live a lot. Maybe it has some unsolved problem, it still brings us easy, convenience, high quality…and so on. In a word, the new invention of technology makes my life completely.]]==>It is suggested that you focus on describing the effects of a digital camera instead of turning to the general description of technology. Besides, although you mention there are some unsolved problems, but throughout your article, we do not see any mention of the unsolved prolmes. It makes your artilce incoherent.