A9415035 (A3)

The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life(#2)

Since people’s ( requires of life was)==>life demands are getting higher, technology keeps developing. There are many new inventions of high tech which make our living more convenient but there are also some side effects. A mobile phone, for example, has both convenience and entertainment. However, it can harm your body if you using (use) a mobile phone [[for a couple of time]]==>too much. The invention of a mobile phone narrows the distance between people and [[has the very]]==>brings us a lot of convenience. At the beginning, when you are dating with your friends or contacting your family you can tell each other where you are by using a mobile phone immediately, hence it can reduces much time on waiting for each other. Furthermore, the function of mobile phone becomes powerful day by day. When you feel bored and want to kill time, [[the mobile phone equips playing game function]]==>a mobile phone which is equipped with the function of computer games can solve this problem, and it is really an attractive function. In the other hand (On the other hand), [[most of mobile phone has]]==>most of the mobile phones have the camera function. When you forget to bring a camera outside, the most convenience is that your mobile phone can take photos right away. In such a case, the invention of mobile phones makes (make) our lives more convenient. [[Under the rapidly inventing of technology]]==>Although new inventions have done us good in many aspects, there are also many side effects of using high tech inventions. [[In many reports on news, it interprets]]==>Many news have reported that the electromagnetic wave harms our health greatly by [[the mobile phone with long-term use]]==>using a mobile phone for a long time, and it would cause even more serious disease; therefore, we need to avoid those problems. Nowadays, in the world, there are many new products which are invented by people to replace the traditional products, and [[it makes]]==>they make our lives more convenient, entertaining and so safety (safe). [[But the affection of the side effects of those products we have to consider about even if we want to achieve higher technologythis reason, it can really make our life getting better and better.]]==>But we need to take into consideration the side effects of those products when we are thinking to invent new products. Only by thoughtful consideraton that we can make new inventions to improve our life quality.

***Adequate description of both positive and negative effects of a mobile phone. Pay attention to your grammar to make your ideas clearer.