B9215025 (A3)

The Effects of MSN in Modern Life (version 2)

People usually used to [[communication]]==>communicate with each other by telephone or mail in a long distance. But, people now [[have more way]]==>an option to choose in communication, which is MSN. MSN makes people’s communication faster, safer, more esoteric, and clearer than the way people used to communicate. And the effect (to)==>on modern life is the change of communication way.　　　

If people want to [[communication by writing words in letter foretime]]==>communicate with each other by mail, they normally need at least one day to send it to the intended receiver. But, if they use MSN to type words on the Internet, the time which they need to type words and send it is less than half minute, and you do not to have to worry about the message would lost (lose) like sending mails. The message you send by MSN rarely get lost, so, MSN is faster and safer than the traditional way to send words (mails). So people seldom want to send mails to friends today.　　　

People sometimes may care about that their talk would be heard by the others. But if you use MSN for communication, then [[the besetment would be exist anymore]]==>???. When you are communicating by MSN, the other people who near you can not know what you are talking about by listening, the only sound they can hear are many clicks. Therefore, MSN is more esoteric than the traditional way to communicate. [[and many times]]==>That is why now people are mostly using MSN to communicate instead of talking with friends face to face.　　

[[Some people who just can not talk very clear in telephone, but in msn, the problem is easy to solve]]==>For some people who cannot convey what they want to say clearly sometimes on the phone, MSN can solve the problem. If the people you are communicating with do not understand what you want to convey on MSN, MSN also allows you to paint on the chat space, and send files, which make many people [[more like]]==>prefer to staying home talking to their friends by MSN rather than by telephone.　　　

In conclusion, MSN make many people’s life more convenient, but, there are some bad effects on modern life: MSN may let many people do not want to socialize outside that can cause their socialization [[getting worth]]==>get worse.

***A rich description of the effects of MSN. However, you should pay attention to grammar and especially how to break sentences (斷句) to make your writing more coherent.