B9409026 (A3)

The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life(end)

I think evryone must have a computer, we use computer to do many things.And the most important [[one is the Internet]]==>function of a computer is the Internet connection. Internet (is)=>has become popular in recent years, it (effects)=>affects our life very much.Then you will ask how the internet is important?

Think about it, you use the Internet to (take)=>receive e-mails, and you can play online games (in)=>on the Internet, the most important is that you can (take)=>make friends who come from (around)=>all over the world. Even now, we have e-learning that teach me (many)=>much knowleage. And the internet (is)=>has become one of our life; we also use it to store our important date (data), and we can use it to hold a meeting. If you are a student , you must use it to finish your homework, and sometimes you may use it to find the answer (of)=>to questions.Or you can use Internet to contact your parents through MSN or Yahoo! or QQ. And if you want to hear the voice of your parents or friends, you can use the microphone. Moreover, you can use the video to see the people that you want to see.

Therefore, our [[live has become can’t depart to]]==>lives cannot be detached from the Internet. It [[effect our life]]==>affects our lives enormously. For example, when you come back to home (come back home), your first thing is [[that open]]==>turn on your computer to see your Blog or see [[your friends whether is]]==>whether your friends are online. And somebody who works maybe take computer anytime so that (they)=>he can know everything that (they want)=>he wants to know, or do (their works)==>his job. Or you can (see many)==>search much information (in)=>on the Internet so that you don’t have to go to the library. [[Maby]]==>One day if you want to learn something, you don’t have to go to the conference, you can learn that by e-learning.

There are more and more things you can do on the Internet that makes our life become very convenient, and [[let our eyesight become broad]]==>broad our views. Use of the Internet also makes our thinking free. But some effects of the Internet (is)=>are not very good. [[if you take the friend or buy something on the internet, you may be cheated, that make you lose many things.]]==>For example, you might be cheated by friends that you make on the Internet or online shopping. [[And the online game may let you drift, so that you may always play the games , and your grade or your life may be become bad.]]==>Also, you might be addicted to online games, which has a really bad influence on your grades and life. [[It's all effect us , so that we must control ourself do not let the internet destroy our life.]]==>Therefore, we should well control the use of the Internet and do not let the Internet destroy our lives. We must let the Internet become a helper of our life.

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